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Discussion in 'Fiction' started by rampeg, Sep 11, 2009.

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Apakah Kamu suka Poem :???:

  1. Saya Suka :top:

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  2. Saya Tidak Suka :yareyare:

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  3. Saya Sedang Mencoba Belajar Membuat Poem :onfire:

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    Aku hidup dalam haru
    Menelan ludah penuh debu
    Menahan perut busungku
    Tapi kau tetap tak mau tahu
    Ku coba tersenyum dalam sayu
    Ku coba hidup tanpa malu
    Di pinggiran sungai beribu bau
    Tapi kau tetap tersenyum dibalik topengmu
    Aku bukan kotoran
    Yang hanya pantas kau injak
    Aku tetap manusia
    Yang dikodratkan hidup di dunia
    Aku juga diciptakan oleh kasih-Nya
    Aku juga mengharap surga-Nya
    Marilah kita bergandeng [...]
     
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    So Many Times

    So many times,
    I've been recalling about you
    Though you haven't changed at all

    I guess the warm atmosphere has changed
    There is no more sweet conversation
    I could see a bitter smile and tasteless sensation

    We're not going on the same way
    But why we meet again in the same destination?
    It's not necessary to change the direction now

    So many times,
    I've been stumbled up because of you
    Though it can't be helped

    I thought you were enjoy your days very well
    There are so many reason to prove it
    I began to understand why

    They said that you have changed
    But why you keep repeating the same mistakes?
    It's your nature to build the bonds

    So many times,
    I've been confused by your acts
    Though you always pretending to be calm

    Will you come back after a long trip?
    Will you return to these days?
    I never wish that kind of hope
    But i keep asking the same question
     
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    Sekian lama kucari seribu cinta yang hilang
    sering hatiku merana disaatku sendiri
    mungkin Tuhanpun mendengar
    sedikin mohon yang kupinta dariNya
    hingga dirimu pun ada dalam hatiku dan merubah ku menjadi baru
    kubersyukur karna dirimu ada dihati

    Hanya kau yang bisa meluluhkan hatiku yang tlah membeku
    karna cinta yang lalu kau beri hati yang tulus mencintaiku
    hingga akhirnya kitapun bersama untuk slamanya

    Hingga akhrinya kitapun bersama mengisi hari penuh dengan cinta yang abadi
     
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    Keep On

    "I thought that the things that I want to keep
    Isn't a precious things"
    I refrain myself and keep saying it repeatedly
    "I am myself is a precious things
    That someone would keep"
    Sometimes we forgot,
    How important our existence for this world

    We were born to live
    To live in these kind of days
    Days when lie isn't a serious matter
    That's why it's hard to trust anyone else

    Life is never smooth like a silk
    There are a lot of pattern of smiles and tears
    Anything is possible even we have to tear it

    What can I do to save it?
    I'm tired of these days of meaningless fun
    I hope I could become a shooting star
    Just across the sky and then disappear

    "Remember the day when we're forgotten"
    I will keep saying this until I understand
    I don't know if I should leave this lonely world behind

    I want to become your shadow
    I will follow you wherever you go
    Nowhere to run, Nowhere to go
    But my life wouldn't end like a shadow or a shooting star

    Please trust me with all your might
    Then we will continue to walk on this silky road
     
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    Tetesan air yg jatuh dari bumi,,mengiringi laguku. .ku dendangkn sebuah lagu yg kupersembahan dari hati temani sepi. .
    jarak antara kita tlh selimuti kebersamaan ini. .
    Hadirlah kekasih,,dekap dn peluk erat ak,,tancapkn rindu yg membara dlm hati. .
    Biarkn hujan mengiringi keindahan yg kita buat. .
    Kekasih,,datanglah dn bicaralah agr ak smkin tau warna hatimu. .
     
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    "Hasrat untuk Berubah".

    Ketika aku masih muda dan bebas berkhayal;
    Aku bermimpi ingin mengubah dunia.
    Seiring dengan bertambahnya usia dan kearifanku;
    Kudapati bahwa dunia ternyata tak kunjung berubah.

    Maka cita-cita itu pun agak kupersempit.
    Lalu kuputuskan hanya mengubah negeriku;
    Namun tampaknya, hasrat itu pun tiada hasilnya.

    Ketika usiaku telah semakin senja;
    Dengan semangatku yang masih tersisa;
    Kuputuskan untuk mengubah keluargaku;
    Orang-orang yang paling dekat denganku.
    Tetapi celakanya, mereka pun tidak mau diubah.

    Dan kini.....
    Sementara aku berbaring saat ajal menjelang;
    Tiba-tiba kusadari.

    Andaikan yang pertama-tama kuubah adalah diriku!
    Maka dengan menjadikan diriku sebagai panutan;
    Mungkin aku akan bisa mengubah keluargaku.
    Lalu berkat inspirasi dan dorongan mereka;
    Bisa jadi aku pun mampu memperbaiki negeriku.
    Kemudian, siapa tahu.....
    Aku bahkan bisa mengubah Dunia
     
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    Make It Better

    If you can't have what you want
    Start wanting what you have got
    It's not whether you win or lose
    It's how you play the game

    Life is a choice no matter how you think of it
    Do you want to face it and enjoy it?
    Or you don't want to face anything or enjoy anything?
    Make your opportunity and go forward

    You are doing the things that you like
    You are doing the things that you want
    It is natural and normal
    But sometimes forgotten

    If we could survive in problems
    We will always achieve something
    If there's no problems so there's no achievement

    After all is said and done
    A lot more will have been said than done
    It is natural and normal
    But sometimes forgotten
     
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    Dukaku

    Hari ini aku tahu
    Hati itu bukan milikku
    Tak kan ada untukku
    Sedang aku, hanya disini tertunduk
    Menitikkan sedikit duka
    Tenggelam dalam kebingungan
    Rasa sakit menjalari dalam raga dan sukma
    Apa yang harus aku lakukan sekarang?
    Aku tidak tahu
    Bolehkah aku meminta pada Tuhan?
    Aku lupa rasa ini, sakit, kenangan ini?
    Bagaimana harus menenangkan hati ini?
    Aku bukan lagi dewi yang bersinar
    Cintaku telah mati
    Tak ada rasa itu lagi
    Aku berteman dengan warna putih ini
    Berusaha tersenyum pada duka ini
    Tapi aku masih menyukaimu
    Masih saja…
     
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    Smug and Conceited Once More

    The cannibals are nauseating
    And the innocents are loathing them

    He strives to have a faith in
    But he is going to diminish

    I grieve since they are dead
    I'm not obsolete like what they think

    The stars are too far away tonight
    And the sun went to faint already

    He would go to the moon for them
    But he is disappear as the moon comes

    I can't see to what happened on my mind in my heart
    It's really shredded and clouded within my head
     
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    Be Yourself
    [bikinan gw sendiri]

    when there is no time remains...
    when there is no longer life to live...
    when there is no hope to stand for...
    when there is no light shines...
    when there are no people to help...
    when there is no air to breathe...
    when there is no shelter place to protect...
    will you always be with me?

    when you are yourself...
    yourself will always be with you
    in every time you are,
    every life you live,
    every hope you stand,
    every light that shines,
    all people you help,
    every breath you take,
    and everywhere you are.
     
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    I love you
    I choose to love you in silence..
    ..for in my silence I find no objection

    I choose to love you in my loneliness..
    ..for in my loneliness no one owns you but I..
     
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    Special Poem To The Dreamers

    DREAM

    It’s not a mistake…

    When you have a dream in your life

    It’s not a mistake…

    When you try to get it with all your weakness

    It’s not a mistake…

    When you get failure in the finally

    It’s not a mistake…

    When you feel sad in your unsuccessful

    It’s not a mistake…

    When you need time to get up again

    But

    It’s a mistake…

    When you cry in your unsuccessful

    And

    I’t’s a big mistake…

    When you think to stop your dream

    Because

    Dream is beginning of effort

    Effort is way to get success

    And successful is realization of your dream


    Thank You For Reading My Poetry
    :idws:
    Enjoy!​

     
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    Dulu Daku menuntunmu menapaki jalan kehidupan ini
    kini temanilah dakuhingga akhir jalan hidupku
    Berilah daku cinta kasih dan kesabaranmu
    Daku akan menerimanya dengan senyuman penuh syukur
    Di dalam senyumku ini, tertanam kasihku yang tak terhingga padamu
     
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    In My Room

    Here, in my room
    I've been showing so many feelings
    That no one else would know
    Which direction i'll go afterwards

    So many things that i want to give to everyone
    This feeling, This pain, This moments, please accept it all as a good memories

    At this kind of moment, the words that running around in my mind is only "Thank You"
    Even i can't say it out loud, i think anyone could understand the shape of my face

    Here, in my room
    I've been flooding this place with overflowing tears
    I'm not sad or anything but this is the result of each memories

    I've been searching the perfect words to express this feeling
    But, it's not like me who always telling something with uncertain thoughts

    At this kind of moment, the only thing that i could do is just humming the messages
    Even i can't do it properly but at least i didn't hurt anyone else

    I want to protect that time, so no one can interrupt the story
    I want to protect that experience, so you can embrace that moment

    If everyone could understand what does it means to take the pain,
    They will welcome the pain peacefully, not forcefully

    Here, in my room
    I understand it all..
     
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    The Power to Decide

    when you look at your mirror
    you can choose which side of you
    that you want to see
    you can see your good
    or your bad side
    you can enjoy your happiness
    or you stumble into sadness
    you can see your beauty inside
    or your beauty outside
    you can see the pain
    or see the happiness
    "how can I choose them?" you asked

    when I look at my mirror
    I decide, my image is what I want to see
    In my image I'm the perfect one
    live a perfect life
    enjoy a perfect career
    share a perfect love with someone special
    decide faster
    to get happy earlier
    Decide now,
    or you are gonna be undecided forever
     
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    Wahai Putri

    Mengapa aku ada mengisi kehidupanmu
    Itu karena aku ingin memberimu sesuatu
    yang bahkan orang lain pun tak perlu tahu
    Adalah hamba yang selalu setia padamu
    Menunggu perhatian dan kasih sayangmu

    Wahai putri, adakah kau peduli?
    Pada cinta yang suci ini
    Tahukah kau, untuk membuatkanmu satu bait puisi
    Aku butuh merenung dan tidak buang angin dalam sehari

    Kini tinggallah sebatang kara
    Pemuda yang malang tak punya apa-apa
    Hanya ketulusan yang ia butuhkan dalam hatinya
    Untuk menuai harapan dari pagi buta
    Hingga petang menjelang turunnya kuasa

    Wahai putri, pernahkah kau mengerti?
    Pedihnya luka yang mendera diri ini
    Mohon tunjukkan arti perjuanganku selama ini
    Agar tiada sesal dikemudian hari

    Sebab datang masa raga ini akan hilang dari sisi
    Lalu siapa lagikah yang akan mengagumi?
    Pada sosokmu yang sangat berarti?

    Pumpkinz
     
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    Still Alive

    You have changed
    I have changed
    Just like you
    Just like you

    For how long
    For how long
    Must I wait
    I know there's something wrong

    Your concrete heart isn't beating
    And you tried to
    Make it come alive

    No shadows
    Just red lights
    Now I'm here to rescue you

    Oh I'm still alive
    I'm still alive
    I can't apologise no

    Oh I'm still alive
    I'm still alive
    I can't apologise no

    So silent
    No violence
    But inside my head
    So loud and clear

    You're screaming
    You're screaming
    Cover up with a smile I've learned to fear

    Just sunshine
    And blue sky
    That's just how it goes
    For living here

    Come fire
    Come fire
    Let it burn and love come racing through

    Oh I'm still alive
    I'm still alive
    I can't apologise no

    Oh I'm still alive
    I'm still alive
    I can't apologise no

    Learn to lose
    Learn to win
    Turn my face against the wind

    I will move fast
    I will move slow
    Take me where I have to go

    Oh I'm still alive
    I'm still alive
    I can't apologise no

    -Lisa Miskovsky
     
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    Your Love is Hurting Me*

    Before I fall too fast
    Kiss me quick
    But make it last
    So i can see how badly this will hurt me
    When you say good bye

    Keep it sweet
    Keep it slow
    Let the future pass
    And don't let go
    But tonight i could fall to soon under this beautiful moonlight

    But you're so hypnotizing
    You got me laughing while i sing
    You got me smiling in my sleep
    And I can see this unraveling
    And your love is where im falling
    But please don't catch me

    See this heart
    Wont settle down
    Like a child running scared from a clown
    I'm terrified of what you'll do
    my stomach screams just when I look at you

    Run far away
    So I can breathe
    Even though you're far from suffocating me
    I can't set my hopes to high
    Cuz every hello ends with a goodbye

    But you're so hypnotizing
    You've got me laughing while I sing
    You've got me smiling in my sleep
    And I can see this unraveling
    Your love is where im falling
    But please don't catch me

    So now you see
    Why I'm scared
    I cant open up my heart without a care
    But here i go
    Its what i feel
    and for the first time in my life i know its real

    But you're so hypnotizing
    You've got me laughing while I sing
    You've get me smiling in my sleep
    And i can see this unraveling
    And your love is where im falling
    So please don't catch me

    And if this is love
    Please don't break me
    I'm giving up
    So just catch me

    -Demi Lovato

    ===

    Don't let me cry like this anymore

    *The original title is Catch Me

    EDIT:
    Patah Hati yang Absurd!

    Aku tak mencintainya
    Kusadar aku tak bisa memilikinya
    Aku merasa ada yang mengganjal di hatiku
    Kutahu aku takut kehilangan dirinya

    Namun aku bukan lah laki-laki yang pantas di sisinya
    Kata-kataku sampai saat ini telah semakin tak menentu
    Namun aku bukan lah laki-laki yang pantas di sisinya
    Kamulah yang saat ini mengacaukan hatiku

    Aku cinta
    Tapi aku tidak tahu kepada siapa aku cinta
    Absurd??
    Tentu saja, jangan ditanya

    Terkadang semua yang di dunia ini tidak bisa dijelaskan dengan kata-kata
    Dan hal ini membuat diriku tertawa dalam hati
    Terkadang aku sakit hati sendiri
    Apalah daya

    Galau
    Perasaan yang tidak jelas maunya apa kepadaku
    Kacau
    Itulah kata-kata yang pantas untukku
     
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    Sama

    Aku hidup dalam haru

    Menelan ludah penuh debu

    Menahan perut busungku

    Tapi kau tetap tak mau tahu

    Ku coba tersenyum dalam sayu

    Ku coba hidup tanpa malu

    Di pinggiran sungai beribu bau

    Tapi kau tetap tersenyum dibalik topengmu

    Aku bukan kotoran

    Yang hanya pantas kau injak

    Aku tetap manusia

    Yang dikodratkan hidup di dunia

    Aku juga diciptakan oleh kasih-Nya

    Aku juga mengharap surga-Nya

    Marilah kita bergandeng tangan

    Wujudkan mimpi kita bersama
     
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    jatuh cinta

    Hatiku meledak
    Jantungku berdetak
    Bibirku tak dpt bergerak
    Ku ingin kau tau sesuatu
    Bahwa kau adalah sesuatu
    Dan sesuatu yg harus kamu tau
    Ku tlah jatuh cinta padamu
     
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