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    buat para member IDWS yang punya hobi bikin POEM.. bisa di share di sini :top: kalo misalkan yang kamu Share itu Buatan Orang Lain.. kamu WAJIB mencantumkan sumber dan penulis nya, pakailah bahasa yang dapat di mengerti oleh sebagian besar penduduk IDWS : Indonesia atau Inggris, kalaupun menggunakan bahasa negara lain harap disertakan terjemahannya agar teman-teman lain memahami, and 1 day max 1 post

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    THE DESPERATE

    The desperate begin eating my body

    i always fight with it
    but i always lose

    i always hide it from everyone
    but ican`t

    now....
    in this corner room
    i cooped up
    alone
    and desperately

    no one can`t touch me here
    no one can`t see me
    no one will care about me

    so....
    i can live happily with this style
    coz no one will make me hurt
    like you did to me....
     
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    A ROSE FOR THE BURNING FIRE

    The walk desperation,unending without ease,
    flowing rivers of tears, stained in sorrow, drowning me
    bloodshed with cause of no cause
    but hope to achive one things from its satanic ritual
    my eyes close under weakness
    as i lay down to my knees from this fight
    loosing my next breathe
    from weariness
    shadow watching me
    and toxicating my dreamsfor happiness
    their smiles haunting my faith
    bearing their teeth in delight
    as i grip my ounce song and purity
    to strive for a haven of light
    no books their words in vain
    pleading me false truth to healing and
    finding salvation
    following salvation
    following my own faith
    the bells ring loud in the looms of my mind
    singing my lone song of sorrow
    surrounded by this darkness loathed in its fire
    not a grave to rest in nor a heaven to die under
    eternal bide of desperation reign, to throw
    a rose for the burning fire
     
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    desperate poem

    have you ever felt
    your heart beating so slow???

    Have you ever screaming
    so loud but no one wants to hear you???

    Have you ever hiding in the bathroom
    while crying all night long???

    Have you ever been forced to became adult
    while inside you`re only child????

    Have you found god????

    Have you ever felt like an outsider???

    Have you ever felt like no body
    understand you???

    Have you ever find the answer of all
    this question????

    Really???
    Have you???
    Well.......
    Well come to my world
     
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    "i cry"

    i cry with bloody tears

    i cry with all my fears

    i cry in heart-ache and pain

    i cry while living in vain

    i cry with torn soul

    i cry with cold weary eyes

    i cry in the mist of all these lies

    i`m alone, no1 beside me
    i`m broken, i`m empty inside
    in this dark beautiful nite
    i`ll be the god of mine
    i`ll broke the rule world
    and leave this pain forever
     
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    in silence i wait
    waiting for you to come back
    waiting for you to fill my empty heart

    why you leave me when
    i feel that you are my true love

    why you leave me when
    i fell that you are the one
    that i always searching for

    its hurt........
    very hurt.......

    this wound will never heal
    altough it has been cure
    it will stay an unforgetful stain in here.......
     
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    I WAS REMINDED

    as we lay there quiet
    i was reminded of all the reason
    why i lust you
    your smile,
    and the way it teased at me
    seductively
    your laugh,
    and the way it tempted
    me
    your eyes,
    and the way they seen to
    hypnotize me

    as we sat there silent
    i was reminded of all the reason
    why i love you
    your smile,
    and the way it bring
    such life into me
    your laugh,
    and the ways it makes
    everythings okay
    your eyes,
    and the way they seem
    to read my thoughts

    as we stand here now
    i was reminded of all reason
    i hate you
    your smile,
    and the way it confused me
    your laugh,
    and the way it seems to
    mock me
    your eyes,
    and the way they can look into me
    and not feeling a thing
     
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    ude lama ga ngepost
    post lage agh

    SENT ME AWAY

    Send me away,
    I cut myself today,
    You told me to stop,
    I tried to stick with pot,
    But ****, I just can't stop.

    I'm ******* up my life,
    I fix it with a knife,
    when will I get it right?
    Not tonight.

    I make my mother cry,
    It makes me want to die,
    I thought I was the only one to cry for myself,
    I need some serious help.

    **** this ******* world,
    Im tired of ******* up,
    Wheres the end of the ******* rainbow??
    Where the fucks my luck!?

    You always treat me like shit,
    You'll never understand,
    this hurt im ******* feeling,
    was caused by no woman or man.

    It was caused by me!
    now I must ******* bleed!
    But you want me to stop,
    I wont stop until i drop!

    You always check my wrists,
    You never check my legs,
    I'll bleed until i can shed no more,
    And I'll be left in the grave.

    Say your goodbyes,
    and start faking your crys,
    Because I'll be gone by tommorow,
    Away from all these lies.
     
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    As I look into your pitfall eyes...
    I ask you to follow me
    Follow me to another place
    Follow me to another time
    fade of existence with me

    As we come into focus
    Everything seems so outta place
    So unplugged
    So forgotten

    As the blood seeds from my wrist
    All I can do is watch your face in the Opate red Reflection
    All I can do is close my eyes and feel your Magnetic eyes Shedding Tears onto my body

    So I run
    Run away from LIFE
    Run away from YOU
    All I can do is NOTHING

    When I return from my day dream
    I feel your Lips press'd against mine
    Your hand stroking my back
    The loud clank of metal
    The GUNSHOT that tones the END OF THE DAYS
     
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    momod koq di close thread ku
    kan dloan aku yang bikin thread
    T.T gpp dagh disini juga ga masalah


    FEEL THE PAIN
    The though kept running through my head
    Has been for a while
    I couldn't take another night
    So I did it

    Still bleeding
    Still hurting
    But it felt so good
    I felt at home
    In the pain that I remember
    A familure feeling

    When I could feel the blade cutting through the skin
    All the anger began to sink in
    I felt control in every slice I made
    And for every slice
    I let a memory fade

    Finaly the bleeding is stoping
    I still feel the pain
    But the pain is calming
    Better than feeling nothing at all
    Better than thinking about our dying love
    Better than anything would be to die

    Now as I lie in my bed all alone
    And cry myself to sleep
    I hope when tmrw comes
    I wont feel anymore pain
    I hope the touch doesn't leave too much of scares
    I'll dream of the love, the moment when the time was ours
    And when morning comes
    I hope I can let go

    For everything we always had but never got to share
    I guess it doesn't matter no more
    I always knew
    Life is not fair

    But for the future we wont have together
    I hope you know how much you've lost
    To get back one day from the past
    Would mean everything to me
    Too bad i'll never getta see
    What would have been
    If what we had
    Had lasted
     
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    If...

    If only I could touch your existence like yours touch mine
    Every single aspect of my life would've been perfect
    If only your turbulence didn't disturb mine
    I will surely survive this bare field of voidness

    If, somehow you could feel MY presence
    My strong will to survive this wave
    Just please, raise your head up high
    See that I'm here standing still

    This pain surely is causing great disturbance upon me
    Knocking the door of my distorted heart
    Haven't I told you already?
    In the darkness soul of my mind, all I can see is light.
    Illuminating each side of my life with pain, for it is you.
     
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    Ungkap dirimu

    Aku kehabisan kata-kata tuk mengungkap keANGGUNanmu semata
    Hanya terbaca oleh jiwa yang peka terhadap rasa
    Hanya teraba hati yang tak terlihat mata
    Membisikan alunan cinta yang tak tampak oleh suara

    Desiran cinta yang mengalir lembut hanyalah suara semu
    Tak terdengar perlahan lembut menusuk kalbu
    Belaian rasa menyentuh tak terasa oleh tubuh
    Menghujam jiwa yang tersentuh merasa rapuh

    Hujaman itu begitu tajam ketika menusuk
    Bagi hati yang lemah pasti kan takluk
    Bisikan itu begitu lembut ketika merasuk
    Bagi hati yang resah pasti kan lapuk
     
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    at the first time we meet again
    i fall in love to u
    and u feel the same to me
    u never want me to go
    u always want me arround u
    i think so fragile
    so i can`t hurt you
    i never want to hurt you

    but now
    u allready change
    u never want to see me
    u never care all about me
    u always hurt me but i can`t hurt you back
    coz you are the one i love
    u are the only one to me

    is this the love that u want???
    hurt the other but never want to get hurt
    is it the ego from you???
    "yes it is"
    and i hope you can find someone who
    really love you like i`m
     
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    Membusuk diikat rantai

    Tatkala surya tlah habis tawanya,tlah habis masa senjanya..
    Dia menutup indera nya dibawah renungan kelam..
    Berharap nanti ia dapat bangkit menyelimuti kegelapan dengan cahaya

    Lalu kemanakah engkau saat aku merenung menunggu kepakkan mu tuk mengkibasi ku lagi?..
    setelah berkumandangnya sebuah perintah
    Tolonglah perdengarkan lagi aku alunan musik dari Bremen
    Suara dalam jiwa salah satu pembawanya..
    Tiada habis termakan zaman
    Menggelantung bagaikan nafas-nafas di pojok-pojok langit
    Memenuhi semua hasrat yang ada tuk bangun dan bergema

    Sebagai gantinya kau tahu bahwa dunia kan tersenyum mesra
    Begitu besar harapanku mengenai engkau
    Namun masih ada sisa jiwanya yang masih menggenangi langkah mu
    Sehingga kau terikat dalam benang yang kuat
    Erat hingga kau tergopoh-gopoh tuk melangkah di dalam kepekatan

    Tak terbantahkan kau memang sulit tuk memuntahkan
    Semoga aku bertemu lagi dalam hujan yang deras
    Deras sederas-derasnya biar tak ada bekas dalam sengit dan getirnya panas

    by: Rangga Aditya at www.rampagesrangga.blogspot.com
     
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    Puisi Cinta Anak Accounting

    Wahai Kekasihku...
    Debetlah cintaku di neraca hatimu
    Kan ku jurnal setiap transaksi rindumu
    Hingga setebal Laporan Keuanganku

    Wahai kekasih hatiku...
    Jadikan aku manager investasi cintamu
    Kan ku hedging kasih dan sayangmu
    Di setiap lembaran portofolio hatiku
    Bila masa jatuh tempo tlah tiba
    Jangan kau retur kenangan indah kita
    Biarlah ia bersemayam di Reksadana asmara
    Berkelana di antara Aktiva dan Passiva

    Wahai mutiara kalbu ku....
    Hanya kau lah Master Budget hatiku
    Inventory cintaku yang syahdu
    General Ledger ku yang tak lekang ditelan waktu

    Wahai bidadariku....
    Rekonsiliasikanlah hatiku dan hatimu
    Seimbangkanlah neraca saldo kita
    Yang membalut laporan laba rugi kita
    Dan cerahkanlah laporan arus kas kita selamanya
    Jika di hari closing nanti, Tidak ada kecocokkan saldo
    mungkin cinta kita harus dijurnal balik
     
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    Burden of Truth

    Burden of Truth

    For those who are keep struggling
    From the insanity of these days
    You will find the appropriate answer sooner

    When you lose the feeling of kindness
    The world seems turning into black & white
    We're longing for something that we want to embrace

    Losing my feeling,
    Falling into the dream,
    Is it me who escape from the reality?

    "Are you expecting something unchanging?"
    Probably, the future has the answer
    In order to save myself from these illusion
    I won't stray on this path by myself

    At the moments where my tears calling out your name
    The colors of the sky are fading into black
    I couldn't see my reflection in the mirror
    Am i losing my identity?

    Baseless predictions,
    Hopeless expressions,
    Is that the sign of despair for me?

    There's nothing called truth if i keep on escaping
    Reality is something we should chase
    Even it's run away from us
    That's why it never ends...
     
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    Sacred Time

    Ecstasy from the night of the darkness
    Clear pitch black sky
    Exoticism for the light
    Sacred sensation for the dark

    For the darkness who live below the starry sky
    Save my soul from this light
    Burden me with the darkness
    Hug me
    Grab me
    Trance me

    Lord of the death world
    Spread those misery
    Bring mankind to their death
    although it's just for a while
    just bring them to their death

    In the name of the master of misery
    Break every smiles and laughs !
    Reassemble them in other place
    Into one world
    One dream

    Oh, Goddess of the night
    Bring me into your world
    To see those beauty world
    or maybe misery world of nightmare

    Into dreams on my sleep
     
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    Dream Trip

    Dark room, Pillow train, Lullaby song
    Get ready for a dream trip over the night
    We'll departing soon no matter how you resist
    Take me away, Let me fly away

    Somewhere in this world,
    Where the destination lies ahead
    The place where Hope and Imagination painting
    The image of uncertain future

    We'll arrive soon but
    We differs from the real world
    If only you remember...

    Family, Friends, Lovers
    Appears in the same place at the same time
    What's on your mind?

    On my way, On the way, By the way
    Who created these illusion anyway?
    Take me away, Let me fly away

    Something in this world
    That cannot be seen by physical eyes
    Something that your heart would see,
    And make your mind thinking about it so often

    We'll get it soon
    But we have to chase it
    No matter how

    Identity and Personality
    Differs unexpectedly so many times at the same time
    What's on your mind?

    Dark room, Pillow train, Lullaby song
    Get ready for arrival in the next station
    We'll arrive soon but we differs from the real world
    Please remember...
     
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    Untitled

    Between us oceans, treacherously deep
    before us mountains, perilously steep
    unbridled passion tamed by crashing waves
    ignited spark withheld from fuel it craves

    Connecting us, an interwoven web
    sustaining us, these words that flow and ebb
    a bond formed on the strength of common ground
    an intimate exchange so rarely found

    By day and night we come together here
    though distance separates, hearts hold us near
    our body clocks now synchronised, in tune
    with astral phases ruling sun and moon

    Within this net restricted space frustrates
    Beyond, for us a new horizon waits

    By: Karyn Crest
     
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    Always

    The day you were born, the whole world was blessed
    These thoughts in my mind to you I must confess

    The time has come for me to express my true feelings
    You are the center of my thoughts and the essence of my being

    What you have brought me I never thought I could procure
    The gift of comfort, with you I am secure

    For you have lifted me up from a life filled with sorrow
    And made me realize there is always a better tomorrow

    It amazes me how someone can make me feel this way
    I love you more and more with each passing day

    You brighten my days and lift my spirits
    I have felt this for so long and now want you to hear it

    So you may know the place you hold in my heart
    You are always with me even when we're apart

    I truly believe what we have is meant to be
    Just open your heart and soon you shall see

    What I am willing to do to keep a smile on your face
    Just know that I'm here and will be always
     
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