OriFic Folk(His)lore

Spoiler: Abyss

Prologue
i don't remember anymore, 1 hours, 2 hours, how long the time has passed. the calm remain and the darkness from this cave seeping inside my head. but my body keep crawling, i had been wished for that i gonna find the hopes beyond the darkness. i had to survive. i don't wanna die at the nowhere. keep crawling, even though the bleeding on my head won't stop.

in the abyss, i keep my hope to survive.

that's....the prolouge of my story. i don't know what kind of story this is, yet. maybe an abstrack story, who know.
i'm not confident enough with my grammar, but i just gonna throw this to you.
'Brick' very welcomed

 

Oke, dan kita baru sampai di sana baru terbangun

sent from Rokkenjima island​

 

Spoiler: Abyss Chapter 1

Sana just woke up from his deep slumber, but it's still dark yet his watch showed that it's already ninth in the morning. while sana dragged up his limb to reach lamps switcy, he was stumble upon a pile of book and knocked his head so hard. Sana groaned.

"damn, stupid book. who the hell put the book over there !"

when he opened his eyes, sana startled,

"eh .. where is it?"

sana didn't believe what he see. his room has changed, wherever he see was the pile of black book.

"when did i bought soo many book?" sana confused, as his hand touch a book.the book covered with black leather, an acient looking scripts written on it and sana didn't have slightest clue how to read the scripts.

sana picked and open the book and skimming through it. however, he still couldn't figure out yet what the content of the book yet.

"the picture is .... strange, a ritual?"

in the picture, there is a man in robe tearing apart the book and then a gate apeared beside him.

"maybe if i torn this book, i will able to come out from this place"

sana torn the book, and suddenly a crest with purple dark light bursted out in front of sana.

"what's going on?!"

and then, everything become white

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ok, i lied. seems like i just gonna put only one .... and then again, what did i just write?

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ok, it's early... so i didn't have to dump it tomorrow.
then again, just what has been i write all about?

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we are still on chapter 1, it's decided then that i gonna use Fantasy theme in this story.
expect i will get more inspiration for this story.

 

Spoiler: intermission

Hei, let me tell you about a story

a boy who awoke in the middle of abyss

where despair and evilness are lurking around

Story about the boy whose wanna survive in the abyss and find the way out there.

perhaps, he gonna find his salvation at the end of abyss

wait a minute, is there "the end of abyss" at the abyss?

sorry for my broken english, i just want put it in here and find some interesting material out there again.

 

no, it's my orific.
i will build it everyweek until become a whole 1 chapter.
so don't except a fast continuation of the story

 

Spoiler: chapter 2

The dungeuon has errie felling lingering in air as the creature of dungeon lurking around. A rarely visited dungeon as it places in the abyss, as they living wildly and strong one ruler over everything. Of course that isn't exactly like that either if you're brainless creature who thinking like that. Unfortunately they are really brainless creature whose feeding from the crystal that scatering around in the dungeon

 

inggris nya menarik. mungkin kalo inggris nya gk kek gitu ceritanya gk bakal semenarik ini, dan membantu juga karena penggalan chapter nya pendek2 tapi plotnya berjalan jelas.

ya beginilah salah satu alesan kenapa gw gk terlalu demen ama para grammar nazi yg serasa maksain orang2 nulis dengan tata cara seperti itu tok. when you can have an interesting delivery like this, i don't think grammar is kind of important. it's fun to read.

kalo soal jelek sih menurut gw nggak, ya gw ngerti2 aja sih ceritanya. tentang cowok yg nyasar di suatu tempat, ataukah tempat terkutuk dan nyoba pergi dengan melakukan suatu ritual (nyobek kertas, dll).

semoga sukses dengan ni cerita gunz

 

building the background really pain in the ass

i need research some human devil nature for material purpose