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OriPoem I be there

Discussion in 'Fiction' started by fajarokim, Jan 25, 2014.

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    If all people don't trust you
    i will be the only person trust you
    if you sad and want cry please come to me
    i will there for you
    are you know what i fell?
    the felling is first time to me
    to fell in love someone so beautiful
    i fell want to protect you
    fell want see your smile
    i want you fell happiness
    maybe i'm not prefect guy
    but my love is eternity to you
    maybe i cant be like him
    maybe he so perfect for you
    but i always be the same person
    i wont be the a romantic guy
    but i will be the man who that love you
    love your shortage and excess
    no matter what your choice
    i will accept that with smile
    your happiness also mine
    your sadness also mine
    if i have a chance
    between have you or meet you
    i will chose chance to meet you
    because meet you is a bless to me
    you always look at him with lovely eyes
    but when your eyes look me
    in there your eyes i cant know what you mean
    is like or hate?
    you always talk about him
    you rarely talk about me
    i know you still love him
    no matter how much he hurt you
    you still love him
    because he the one you love
    you meet him earlier than me
    so i think he a good man
    a man who can make you love him
    a something i cant do
    i only a ordinary boy
    not have much award and good personality
    meet with you is something i never knowing to me
    you like bring me from dark to the light
    i fell want to love someone again
    after meet you
    but your heart belong to him
    the only thing i can do
    only always there for you
     
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    Aduh segitunya kamu pada dia :matabelo:

    *pukpuk*
    Semoga dia membuka hatinya untuk anda :peluk:


    Merendah diri :hmm:

    Kesimpulan: Ini puisi tentang cinta anda bertepuk tangan sebelah.
    Mengandung kesedihan dan kekecewaan anda pada dirinya. :nangis:
    Sabar ya, Yakinlah.. Tuhan mempunyai rencana yg jauh lebih indah untuk dirimu :))
     
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    vocab sma grammarnya kurang tpi feel nya ada,
    tpi klo di rl mending w lari maraton 3kilo dripada bacain gnian depan cewek :malu:
    too sweet, bisa kena diabetes wkwkwk
     
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