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OriPoem Puisi by yshs2

Discussion in 'Fiction' started by yshs2, Nov 17, 2012.

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    permisi semuanya
    perkenankan sy menulis semua puisi murahan dan tidak ada gunanya di thread IDWS ini
    hanya untuk iseng2 dan hobby saja..
    sebelumnya maaf aja neh, bila ada grammar, kata2 yg salah, maklumlah.. sy bukan saksepere
    bkn jg penulis terkenal.. sy cmn manusia biasa yg msh punya bnyak kesalahan..


    the star's.. so many appearing

    i can't see the star's while in the evening

    but, i can feel the brightest star on ma feelin'

    why..? maybe its just ma imagination.. of day dreaming..


    why..?? ya re always appearing...

    on ma mind.. on ma imagination, on ma feelin'..

    i always dream that ya will come to me someday..

    but, ya re already gone..

    forgive me that im always being selfish on our beautiful moments...


    made by june
    thanx to evie..


    pelangi indah sesudah hujan..

    hidup indah sehabis penderitaan...

    karena disitulah kasih allah nyata tak berkesudahan..

    beruntungnya hidupku..

    mempunyai banyak teman yg menemaniku..

    tetapi, ada yg lebih berharga daripada itu..

    yaitu kedua orang tuaku..

    merekalah harta paling berharga bagiku..

    tak pernah kusia siakan saat-saat dimana mereka merawatku..

    made by june..
    thank god.. im still alive, and ma parents still healthy..




    dibalik kesedihan tersimpan kesenangan dan kebahagiaan yg tdk terungkap..

    dibalik kebahagiaan dan kesengan yg brsn dilakukan,trsimpan kesedihan dan kesepian yg sgt mendalam...

    msh teringat dgn ms lalu dan ingin kembalibeban yg sgt mendalam bagi hidup ini...



    apakah aq bisa melalui cobaan hidup ini..?

    apakah aq bisa melupakan masa laluku yg penuh dgn kekelaman..?

    apakah aq bisa merubah masa depan..?

    tak kusangka aq sungguh kesepian...



    by : june 7-3-12, 01-12 am

    thanx to ma bad memory






    biar lonely,

    tp enjoy and happy feeling soo smoothly,freshly and softly..

    but I'm affraid,there's jealously, from a friend who look's like friendly,

    and full of hostility with ma handsomemity..

    also ma cuty(face),ahh.. this is ma destiny, to be the handsome guy..

    off course not a gay,

    coz I'm fully of immortality

    and ma heart re full of heavenly



    forgot when did i wrote this,

    thanx to ......... that really extremely inspired me so much..
     
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    the greatest poem for evie

    im a man.. i'll (fly to the sky), smiliar like (shin hye sung), fast like (turbo),

    good at teamwork like (shinwa), high like (kim min jong), dance like (um jung hwa),

    love's techno like (lee jung hyun), sweet like (F.I.N.K.L),

    and im (H.O.T) , also.. got a litle sister as cute as (baby vox), but,.. always pray to the (G.O.D)..

    im cool and steady like (jang woo hyuk), and i wish i could be like (kang ta)



    made arround in the year 2009
    bye june
    thanx to evie for gave me the courage and memories that we spent together for all this time



    loneliness

    the world is full theatrical...
    this life has just began...
    it's awful...
    and it's so depressed...
    don't have any choice then...

    why.........
    life's sucks....
    maybe i got to much problems that's really sucks, hahahahaha....
    where's my lady...??
    at home with her parent's..
    sure..??
    maybe with some other guy...
    but.. anyway...
    don't give a damn about it anymore....

    face it june...
    don't run from it....
    it's always pursuing ya...
    at any time whenever ya ready or not....
    a spirit''' that ya needed to face it...

    the engagement that i build a year ago....

    now it's just bullshit...
    it's just an empty dream....

    now, without her anymore...
    i lived with my loneliness...
    with full of loftiness....
    of my nature...

    hooooaaaammm.....
    i am extremely sleepy.........

    made May 24, 2009 at 6:53am the title should be : broken engagement
    by june
    thanx to evie who has taught me many thing's in this life..
     
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